Certainly looks a lot better.  The female figure is a definite improvement, although the fingers on the right hand look weird.  The male figure needs some heavy postwork on the clothes to give 'em some realistic wrinkles and folds.

I agree with one of the earlier posts about losing the stroke on the text, though.  Or, at least, lose it on the "by Earl Clark" bits and reduce it on the "Book One".  

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