Nice image. I think you can make the man a bit more powerfull and emotional though. First of all, everybody is too far apart. Moving the people a bit closer together would suggest they were all close when everybody was alive and well. Some notes on the grieving man: his facial expression seems a bit too mild. Anguish would add alot. Right now he looks a bit like he just is going to lose his lunch. And perhaps work on his pose a bit. I personally feel that him kneeling on the ground over her and stroking her hair or something could show more affection towards the fallen one. And the elbow on the dead girl looks dislocated... if you want to keep that angle maybe make it look like a nasty injury. I like the second pose you have for the female knight though. All in all a good job. I just feel it could use some more tweaking. Can't wait to see the final.