Hmmm... she looks perfect to me .... ahm just considering the technically aspects. With textures applied ,she is a real beauty, but... ahm... may I go on? Her untexured shape looks a bit odd to be honest. Reminds me a lot like base Victoria 1 when she was released. This is not that bad, for I like to create my own bodymorphs anyway, but after all Dawn is starting with high standarts. From the pics, I see a to big upper chestcase along the x-axis, while it seems to be flat along the z-axis. Allthough I prefere a slim waist on women too , Dawn's waist appear quite toony to me. She has a lot of chin, and a shoulder width of a guy. Sorry, I didn't intend to troll here, but after those high expectations , this is just , what I see. Besides, if she collects all the features , we all  like to see on a Poser figure, she is allready a winner, though.