Quote - A most excellent animation, very enjoyable. The mirrors are an excellent touch. I do have a couple of nit's, she looks like she is wearing soft shoes, so when walking, the sounds are to loud. It sounds like she is walking on gravel when she is walking on stone floors. The walk on the wooden floors is perfect, except still a little to loud. The children ghosts are another great touch. The castle seems a bit empty, but I'm sure that will change later.

All in all a very good animation and story.

 

Thank you very much for the nice comment and the good imput

I know what you mean , sometimes when one person is doing all work in a long  animation short film . its hard to catch all the  details. as far as the sound effects go I made a "one sound fits for all" the walking sound for when she was walking in the castle because of  the varied floors. so I tried to cover all the sounds.  I recorded myself walking in my basement on a concreate floor. :)

I do have 3 more story boards. so there are plans for more episodes in the future for this character. so I will diffently keep your citique in mind. :)