I have to agree with Hborre, there's both a lack of expressiveness and they never look at each other. they always seem to be looking up and away at something even when talking to each other and they're never facing each other. I've yet to clearly see the back of anyone's head.

Finally, watch your spelling. If you're not sure a word is spelled correctly look it up.

 

Otherwise, very enjoyable and an intriguing storyline.