Quote - Yes, that looks much better!

One slight niggle though, I could be wrong, and it is quite minor. Her right foot looks over rotated, like her ankle is about to break. Yes, you can twist your ankle that far, but it just looks a bit too far. Maybe reducing the rotation by 3-5 degrees would still retain the artistic/dramatic effect, without the ouch factor?

Just out of curiosity, did you use a product like render studio for this, or did you do it all on your own? Regardless, it's a dramatic difference/improvement over the first images. Very well done!

The ankle/foot is over rotated which looks painful but it also looks like her knee is still pointed forward. Ouch!