IMHO, the eyebrows need to come up a bit. Brows are at the top of the orbital ridge of the eye socket.  Looks pretty good aside from that. I noticed the high fashion, noir pictures.  If this is what you are going for, very good start.  I don't know about anyone else, but I'm getting tired of stick figure Barbies that all run together.  Personlly, I would love to see a talented artist give us Gina Lolabrigida, Sophia Loren, Holly Golightly, Bacall...the true beauties of fashion,.

Congratulations and good luck.