Forum: Vue


Subject: Time on my hands....

Larry F opened this issue on Sep 29, 2001 ยท 20 posts


Varian posted Sat, 29 September 2001 at 11:00 PM

Very nice scene, Larry. (And LOL to Claude re: first images!) There are two changes I'd suggest. - As others mentioned, the line of sight on the table. A bit higher or lower camera angle would be a little better, just to change the tabletop from being mostly a "bar" shape to seeming more like a tabletop. With the camera lower, however, you might "fix" the table, but run into the same problem with the chair seats. So maybe higher would be best. Try both ways and see what you get. - The hill in the distance appears to begin and end from one edge of the bay window to the other. That seems much too symmetric for the rest of the composition. So I'd suggest extending the sides of the hill both left and right so that they are out of sight. Or just the left or just the right. :)