This is going to hurt .but I'm not doing this to be mean I wish you very much success .make a million :)

at times I think sells are just dumb luck .

the technical part : bad renders. the adults are not all out sexy. there kinda ugly .they all kinda look a like to me. the hair looks bloody terrible.
I swear i'm looking at a bad cartoon. I'm not buying that wink look either. I'm not saying ya done a half ass job I know ya worked for this but
It projects a half ass job and if you didn't car enough ,neither will they. 

The emotional part  "THE MOST IMPORTANT PART" : This is the part most never get.
Art is 100% EMOTION. POLYGONES N PIXELS HAVE NOTHING TO DO WITH IT !!!
if you look at your render and don't feel over whelmed or excited or aroused or angry or any strong emotion
Well then ... all you have are some colored pixels on a canvases that no one will ever care about.

originality: is it original ?

who ya selling to ? are the ones with money still using V4 ?

 

I apologize if I hurt ya felling in any way ,was not my intentions.

Good Luck 

 

 

 

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The Artist that will fight for decades to conquer their media.
Even if you never know their name ,your know their Art.
Dark Sphere Mage Vengeance