Im really sorry wolfie.. I know I come off harsh.. I am a critic..but Im also trying to help. ( this is why I tend to avoid offering criticisms, especially in public forums ) Im not trying to hurt your feelings, or be an ass. 

Yes - there are positives in what you have submitted - and I dont want you to give up - The second set The Reese sisters look greatly improved.  The textures looked better, and lit much nicer. The morphs are more improved as well.. 

I make characters too and I know just how ridiculously difficult and time consuming they are; I dont doubt for one second you didnt work hard on these sets. Keep your chin up- and the next one focus more on the things I mentioned. I guarantee it will sell better.