a very basic remark here. Does your figure look happy? Does it look "inviting". Does it look like she "wants to meet you". Says ; " Buy me?"

Would you fall in love with someone walking around with that sad expression? Also, there is absolutely no "life" in the texture. No detail, no life, no contrast, no tan nor shadow.

Look to get some "flicker" in the eyes. (Not specular, but that "lifelike flicker" young women can have when they are inviting you to buy. Promo girls "have that" touch of wider inviting eyes. The eyes have no 3D in the mesh nor the texture around the eyes. She looks pale as if she was ill. But even when ill, there must be some "life" in the girl.
And those pouty lips, as if she "has" to kiss, but does not want to kiss.

The only skin texture we see is on the nosebridge, and that's about it.

We see a smoothed head, with a texture deprived of contrast and detail, and a girl that does not like to live. Pale skinned and sad..

Sorry, to be "hard" but that's what I see.

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