Ill chime in again ;0) I think the last renders you have posted are a huge improvement in terms of lighting, posing, and clothing choices.  Her lips dont appear as though they have been changed all that much.   I can see what you are going for Wolfie, but her top lip is pulled out still in a very strange way- reminiscent of a duck bill.  You may have not gotten to it yet.. but her eye situation should be addressed too.  Maybe a less extreme morph around her eyelid, or a heavy duty eyelash map to help solve the problem.  You are making great progress..( Im glad you are not only asking for crits and accepting them, but you are also using all this valuable information in front of us..keep your chin up and keep going! I think there are a lot of people who could learn from this thread :0)