For now, I'm gonna load an old and new image so that you can see the changes in her lips, also I think this hair is best for close up IBL images. 1st image is the old lips, 2nd image is the new, she don't look too sad now lol.

It's better but the main problem is that the lips still look too much like a duck bill. Generally you can have a wide mouth or you can have pouty lips but it's not common to see both at the same time so it looks kinda odd. The ears also need a fair bit of work because the inner whorl is looking really big and out of place.

Folks, seriously, he gets it.  Stop now, please.  He's asked the critiques to stop page back. ENOUGH.

jamminwolf had the courage (and it takes a LOT of courage) to ask.  Now, please honor his request to stop.

I'll second that, not only did he have the guts to ask he is also listening and trying to take a lot of comment on board.  The fact that latest renders are very much improved shows, to his credit, he is working hard and trying to learn.  He knows he has more to do and no figure will ever be perfect, but you have to stop somewhere and by keep adding to the list means we are, to a degree, moving the goal posts. 

 

 

I use Poser 13 on Windows 11 - For Scene set up I use a Geekcom A5 -  Ryzen 9 5900HX, with 64 gig ram and 3 TB  storage, mini PC with final rendering done on normal sized desktop using an AMD Ryzen Threadipper 1950X CPU, Corsair Hydro H100i CPU cooler, 3XS EVGA GTX 1080i SC with 11g Ram, 4 X 16gig Corsair DDR4 Ram and a Corsair RM 100 PSU .   The desktop is in a remote location with rendering done via Queue Manager which gives me a clearer desktop and quieter computer room.