I like the skin colour better now, but that's the only improvement I noticed since the last one, the hands still look too angular to me.  And something I should have pointed out before is that the hip area looks too flat.  I get that she's Asian and a lot of those girls are petite, but even so, I think there needs to be some hint of the hip bones.  The area between the top of the thighs and the hips has no definition at all - so it's making the top of her legs look like one solid piece attached to her hips.

Can't offer any advice on the retopology, but RorrKonn has a great figure in his gallery so I'm gonna chicken-out, he and others can advise better on that.
But yup, as with the ass, there definitely needs to be some definition or 'shape' between the top of the thighs and the hips.