Good photo but I have one recommendation. Tell me if I'm wrong. It seems as though some of the poses are very "planned" and seem like they have been held awhile. You wouldn't think you'd be able to tell, but it definitely shows in this one. Try to use a faster shutter speed and capture your model when they aren't expecting it. Maybe when she's getting into pose position instead of after pose position. Tell a joke and shoot her reaction. Ask a thought-provoking question and quickly shoot her mid-thought. Am I right about the "overposed" look and do you think these suggestions might help? -Andrew