jarm opened this issue on Oct 04, 2001 ยท 6 posts
Varian posted Thu, 04 October 2001 at 1:22 PM
Nice work, Jody. The camera angle is especially good, really pulls a person into the scene. It seems a bit awkward that the form of the gun aligns almost exactly with a form of the structure behind it; makes it seem as if the structure is "growing" from the gun barrel. That could be changed by adjusting the placement of that portion of the structure to be perhaps a bit higher, not quite so aligned. But again, nice work!