Forum: Writers


Subject: Weekly Writers Challenge - Week of 3/07/16

Wolfenshire opened this issue on Mar 07, 2016 ยท 11 posts


Wolfenshire posted Mon, 07 March 2016 at 10:56 PM Site Admin

ldgilman posted at 9:51PM Mon, 07 March 2016 - #4259816

Looks like you have most of them covered. I'm not so sure about "final outcome". As in..."We won't know the final out come until all the votes are counted."

There are countless hundreds of combinations that make redundant expressions. And, let me do a re-write of the above sentence so you can see.

Looks like you have most of them covered. Though, I'm not so sure of the outcome.

or

Looks like you have most of them covered. We won't know until the final ballets are counted.

The test for a redundant phrase is to remove either word, if the sentence still stands, you likely have a redundant expression.

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