quietrob opened this issue on Jul 17, 2019 ยท 196 posts
rokket posted Sat, 17 August 2019 at 5:01 PM
@quietrob: She isn't a cadet. She's a full blown pilot, and this was supposed to be a routine patrol.
I don't know if you remember Jennalyn Walker and the original Eden Prime story I had written. But this story takes place only a couple years after Eden lands on what they thought was an uninhabited planet. I changed the civil war thing into an all out war between the indigenous people and the colonists. It's not unlike a certain history here on Earth. But there are twists.
If I had a nickle for ever time a woman told me to get lost, I could buy Manhattan.