Well, you asked ;). 1. I think the inside of the mouth is too pink and much too light in color. 2. Could you consider any other eyeshadow color than green? I know I personally used to avoid that color because I looked rather like a ghoul when I wore it ;). 3. The crease marks on the lips are too much straight up and down. Maybe angle them out a little more as they approach the sides of the lips. 4. The eyebrows are a bit too dense. You may want to thin them out just a little bit. Other than that, I think it looks okay. Certainly better than I could do ;). Laurie