This is looking really good. Couple of suggestions. The eyeshadow looks much better, but try softening the eyeliner with a smudge brush. It's too dark and harsh. Also, clone out the highlights from the eyes (I'm assuming you used a photo for the irises). dina's cornea layer will let you make very convincing and more realistic highlights by adjusting the reflection. Also, try making the wrinkles on the bottom lip less straight up and down. They should follow the curve of the lip.