That looks much better.  There is still the issue with occlusion under her feet, I wonder if there is an ambient channel active on the ground.  The catchlights on the figure look right.  Keep in mind, a scene like this is difficult to light because you are expecting two very different light sources to be prominent at the same time.  With a camera view this close to the subject, I would expect the campfire to completely overwhelm the ambient moonlight.  But you are looking for a specific effect in your scene.