Hey Jon - Nice try! Druuna's one of my favourites - Serpieri's style is fascinating, total control, beautiful roundness and volume, a style reminiscent of a really competent etcher. Got all his books. Of course, you need to muss up her hair a bit more - clever use of the Betty Page hair - Hellborn I think? Druuna almost never stands on her toes. Put her flatter on the deck. Also, your babe is actually too 'pretty' - Druuna is more handsome than pretty, a very strong face. More thigh and especially muscle round the back of the leg is a good idea. All this sounds terrible, but you DID ask! It's not at all as bad as it sounds. Actually I like your image a lot. Do more of this! :]FishNose