The reflection on the scroll is very nice. But what is still missing (IMHO) is shadows. Do you have "cast shadows" turned on, on your lights? In a fantasy style Inn I would expect very hard shadows. (from the fireplace or candles or whatever) I think it would add a lot to the scene. Usually I have cast shadows activated but shadows at .3 In these case I'd try with the default of 1 for shadows and see what happens. (Btw any self-respecting dwarf would use an Axe instead of a Mace ;-))