shadownet opened this issue on Nov 12, 2001 ยท 35 posts
AprilYSH posted Mon, 12 November 2001 at 3:05 AM
it's a fair image, you were very resourceful to have used those props, i like how her outfit turned out. and all of them freebies? extra points to you! :) some crits: the mountain material and ground material are not convincing. you can see those rocks are just plopped there. i don't know how to fix this specifically, i'm just letting you know what i thought. :) the dragons are posed nicely, but she is not. she could be in a more dynamic position. what is her relationship to the rest of the scene? she could be standing in a shop window for the difference it makes now. wish you luck on the next render. :)
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a sweet disorder in the dress kindles in clothes a wantoness,
do more bewitch me than when art is too precise in every part