Much better. The two things that still need to be modified, in addition to the Hakama, are the Tare and the Kote. The panels of the Tare need to be of a size that they overlap. They should probably be approx mid thigh in length. Part of their function is to protect against any cuts to the Do that miss their target. here is an image http://www.e-bogu.com/comset2ad.html The Kote are more mitten like. They function to protect the fingers from being broken with the wrists are struck with a shinai. They are comprised of a padded front, and a stiff gauntlet-like back, similar to a loose medeval style bracer. The back is loose, with a good two fingers thickness of separation between the arm and the padding. These are two distinct, connected pieces. here is an image http://www.e-bogu.com/kendo-equipment-kote.html Good going!