Very nice Bop... I can see you also have your wife as judge :) I looked and looked and there is not much I can see about this image. The 'dust' looks very convincing. I like the lighting around the skin where the dust is falling. Maybe you could add some reflection of the dust particles above the water. Also... since your sky and moon have a tendency towards green, I would try to add a point light, above her left knee, at shoulder height. Give it a soft intensity and a slightly green color. This could add some contrast to the warm lighting of the dust and some echo of the moonlight. Finally... I am not sure what the snake has to do with the scene. My guess is that she is Eve... am I right ?

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