Very nice Darth. Okay, from the top.... The comic logo is too big, it needs to be shrunk to about half of the size it is now. And the title needs to be bigger - as DerekG says, think DC comics. The figure of the girl is fine apart from the wrist - but that's just a quick tweak. The background (swirly-thing) is fine, and (IMHO) the torn images work just great. Paul