Manikin Flesh opened this issue on Jan 28, 2002 ยท 6 posts
Crescent posted Mon, 28 January 2002 at 5:55 PM
The foreground area is nice. I'd strongly suggest repositioning the cart in the background, though. It's very difficult to tell what the figure in the background is doing. It took a while for me to realize that the guy was not placing the cart on the mound of dirt (burial mound?) but that the cart just happened to be right behind him. (His hands blend into the wood of the cart, skewing the perspective.) You might want to move it over to the right a bit so there is room between it and the man.