It's a strong image - I like it. One suggestion: The man's right hand seems to keep distracting my eyes from where they want to 'travel' through the image. I'd loose the hand. That rectangular object in front of the window light 'raises a question' (chair? suitcase? laptop?), but it doesn't really seem to distract. Hey! 'Osity lets you put anything for download in "free stuff", right? Do you have a Machine Park song on MP3? Joe