Ok, I'll try to be helpful. I've heard many people before and from what little experience I have say that eyewhite's aren't white. They do look more realistic when they are a slight purpleish pink color. Sample some color from photos and experiment. I also think the eyelashes especially on the bottom lids are a little short and or thin. There's also something about the line of lip color on the upperlip where it meets the flesh that just sticks out at me but I can't put my finger on what to suggest. Overall tho everything looks good! Hope I was of some help.