I think maybe his left arm is just a tad bit too much akimbo. Maybe bring his elbow in closer to his body, maybe it would improve the way his sleeve looks. I can't guarantee that will work, but it might be worth a try. His arm is sort of in an unnatural angle away from his body. It makes him look too tense. If he's reading a book, he should look a little more relaxed. And I agree, the dog is great! Wonderful image. Melanie