heya; very nice. i hope my vue comes soon. :) i think i see a bit of the unbalanced-ness of the composition. the main focal point is the figures, or is supposed to be. but over on the gazebo side, there is a lot of interesting lights and patterns and contrasts going on. so your eye kinda wants to look at the figures, but keeps getting distracted by all that on the other side of the picture. the two points of interest are at opposite sides with a sort of dark empty space in the middle, so it feels as if they are playing tug o' war. if you scoot the figures closer to the gazebo, it might work out without having to change camera angles on the wall. did that help?