JordyArt opened this issue on Mar 09, 2002 ยท 18 posts
Antoonio posted Mon, 11 March 2002 at 2:40 AM
Heyhey, whats the trick, wheres the poison, hidden needle? Seriously, nice one Jordy. I really dig that castle, dark mysterious, strange, lonely and bit unnatural, that dark inneryard is fantastic. That bridge surely directs gaze to center of the pic, kind of sucks you into the pic. And, you put pic together really well, no seams can be seem. But what does not work, is background(I can see repeating pattern from rubber stamp in left). These buildings needs to be massive, create that feeling of BIG building. If this would be mine, I would add more sky(more space to top) and lower horizon a bit too. Maybe add space between to bridge and castle too, to give even more space gaze to wander. If you can find intresting sky with big contrast, get rid of that background mountain and use only sky. But, really good work, you can handle the seams and do "whole" work. I'm really diggin' this. .n