More Freckles! and Hazel eyes would be good :) I've always been partial to hazel eyes. Perhaps a little less green in the skin tone? A little more "porcelain"? Just MHO. Otherwise it looks like she's going to be beautiful! OH and i agree about more red in the eyebrows :)

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