I see you took some advice from your earlier pic...used reflections in the water. Not sure how you are doing this...heck, I don't have much time to do any work myself, lately...but it looks like the shadow from the rock is going a different direction from the shadow on the figure. As far as I'm concerned, art being in the eye of the beholder always, to each his own, etc., I'd like to see the character brightened up a bit. For someone throwing a shadow that strong, you'd think she'd stand out a little more. As, I'm assuming, the center of attention, she should be a bit brighter, or less drab than her the surroundings. But, remember, it's just an artistic opinion. Keep going, Ser. I see you are eager to learn!