The top image is extremely attractive to me (as is your friend Cat! mutters to himself...down boy, down! You're married remember!) But enough malarky, back to the photo...There is a repitition of curves on the horizontal plane that I like very much, in the model's body, face, arms and the white background. I think it makes for a very strong composition. (I'm no expert remember this is just my personal take on it) - tell your friend she should have no problem becoming a model, I think she's a natural. The second photo...the girl looks like she's enjoying herself, but the expression on the fella's face is like he is there under sufferance! (Do these friends know you've popped them together like this? lol!) Good work Cat, especially that top image. :-)>