I agree with Bloodsong about the lighting.. the figure doesn't seem to be the primary focus of the picture, and that there should be some debris/small rocks kicking around the foreground. Also, if he's walking, you might want to put some dust clouds around his feet. I'd like to add myself to the "Please mail me the Veritech model" list, if that's ok.. bobandgail@home.com. Thanks TyggerBob