First thing I would do is DECREASE the size of the image!! (if possible) 215KB is pretty big, don't you think? I must say that I like how the foreground is bright and gradually because unpleasantly dark in the background. But what is puzzling me is where the light is coming from? Heaven? If the castle is the main focus of the image, I guess the lighting is perfect, but if not, maybe you would want to do something about that. If you are having burned down camps in the backgroud, then I think you should leave them dark, with little light. And I am also curious why there is a fountain in the middle of the castle. Is it a happy castle with a dolphin fountain, flowers blossuming all over, and armored nights frolicing around, or is it suppose to be a war castle? I'm just playin around, Tempest. I think it is a great image and good job on the castle (all in Bryce? Impressive). Maybe a few lightning flashed in the far distance along the horizon would be interesting. -Adam