The lighting is better, but there's that damn horizon line spoiling it. Dunno if you can do anything about that. You've picked a hard scene to render, but with the darker skies the fires should turn out well as just faint flickers. I'd definitely put something in the castle. A tent, a keep, a bif pile of rocks, something. It's looking good though.

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