Hi Aster. I really like the light & focus of the hall, that has a nice feel to it. I think the problem is with the way you fit into the picture, the focus on you does suggest some movement but your position suggests to me leaning on the wall staring off at something. I think with more of you in the picture would have worked better. Not a question of good or bad, I think it's just about the effect your looking for.

elusive.chaos

"You need chaos in your soul to give birth to a dancing star...." (Nietzsche)