Hi Aster, and welcome. (hmmm - curious, how come so many cute gals are into photography in here, but in the real world...?..tch....lol) I like this pic, nice style & idea,the only thing I can comment on is the fact that because you and the hallway at the end are both lit you seem to be 'fighting' for attention - 2 focal points that seem to conflict. How's about burnin the doorway area just a touch so you are lighter? That will bring all the focus on yourself. (",) p.s. I concur with Slynky, he IS an a$$.