heya; yes, the focus is right on in this version. the ground looks better, even if you didnt change it much (at all?). the only thing i find disconcerting is the lack of a shadow on the ground under the figure, somewhere. he should be casting one forward from the light, over the foreground? (maybe it's behind that little hill thing and he's further back than i think), and from the searchlight, a smaller shadow kinda behind him.