shadownet opened this issue on Feb 03, 2000 ยท 5 posts
Darth_Logice posted Thu, 03 February 2000 at 2:02 PM
Okay Rob, here goes: I think it's a great render, but the trees seem to be too small. Of course, if it's supposed to be small tree land, then it's okay. The only other thing I can see wrong with it is that it is too crisp, which is a giveaway in 3-d art. I would take it into photoshop or whatever and add just a bit of gaussian blur and maybe a dab of noise. Or, even nuttier still, make a layer copy and filter it with art filter (colored pencil, pastel, etc) and then adjust the layers opacity to about 15 percent and flatten. Final note: composition. I can't get a clear picture on what is going on in the picture. Is she afraid of the Lion? Is the Lion angry? He looks downright happy and I just want to pet him. She is kind of..."This is awkward, didn't expect to see YOU here..." So maybe tweak the faces a little bit more to tell a story. Hope that helps. -Darth Logice