Thanks Darth, This is exactly the kind of feeback I am looking for. I thought crips was good, but I see your point and understand it. Composition wise, your take on it sounds right. The lion is suppose to look wise and friendly. A keeper of mysteries who knows what fate holds in store. As for her, ..."This is awkward, didn't expect to see YOU here..." is exactly what I was going for. So if that came across I did okay, but maybe not great. However, I know now by your comments that I didn't quite get it all to gel just right. So back to work - hi ho!