The top one's really nice, like the pose etc, but (imo) needed a localised bit of fill-light just to highlight Guppo himself - not to reveal more of your sister (though that wouldn't be unpleasurable) but more to keep the mystique of the picture...... I hope that sounds 'arty' rather than 'pervy'....lol btw, nice sis, she coming over with Guppo? (",)