I'll add to the chorus: the game model (especially the lower image) looks wierdly distorted, as though she has been extruded through a worm hole or something. Shoulders are way too rounded and the collar bones aren't even close. Your figure is better. If you want the face to resemble the game model's you should make it thinner, raise the cheekbones and slant the eyes and brows. That will all make your character a bit less "human" looking, which seems to be the goal. If I may ask... why the cutout where a pocket ought to be? Carolly