You should refer to the original post on 4/9 so people can see the vast improvement. From my POV you still need to get POV down a little better, and I would start varying the Mountains in the background a bit between picts. Other than that the stepping stones are a good idea, and the out of the water splash looks good if a little under done, but maybe you did that on porpoise. Overdone? No, Infact pretty good. "there's no trains or trucks or prisons or rain or mothers or talkin about gettin drunk" - Steve Goodman