douglas opened this issue on Feb 15, 2000 ยท 6 posts
Roshigoth posted Tue, 15 February 2000 at 1:33 PM
I don't want to sound critical, but you might want to work on the land/water transition a bit more, especially in the background. The foreground at least has a beach (?), but it's still a sudden drop from green to small beach to water, and you can see the edges, like it's a wall. Umm... I noticed I'm rambling. Hope you can make sense of what I said. Rosh