Very nice, indeed. You have addressed the problems of the WIP post, well. If there's a flaw in this version, I can't see it. Congratulations!

This is not my "second childhood". I'm not finished with the first one yet.

Time flies like an arrow; fruit flies like a banana.

"I'd like to die peacefully in my sleep like my grandfather....not screaming in terror like the passengers on his bus." - Jack Handy