My humble personal opinion is that the "still working on" version of this is better (the one you've posted to the gallery is open also, and I'm comparing), as I think that this particular version here is "scratched" and texturised more than necessary...
...Rather distracting perhaps, blocking the beautiful and valuable blurred foliage that is clearly seen in the "still working on" version.
Also, esp. the horizontal and long scratches look rather...regular.

Well, mine is surely just a humble and visual evaluation (as I really am unable to texturise in photoshop), but maybe some other type of "dirtiness", more irregular and less blocking perhaps...

...I think. :)